Character creation
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According to what I’ve read from aspiring writers on the internet, character creation is a very daunting task for some. Many writers have a tunnel vision like problem wherein all they can is an interesting story, but when it comes to creating characters to populate that thriving world known as the story, no matter how fascinating they struggle. This may seem unconnected with the project at hand but I read Haruki Murakami’s Afterdark a few weeks before the weekend had begun and to be honest I was moved by it. His characters seemed to come to life and I didn’t particularly care for the story (as excelent and post modern as it was), I just wanted to look into the lives of his brilliant character. For a few hours after finishing afterdark I felt empty, no longer would I be able to follow the lives of Mari, Takahashi, Kaoru or any of the other misfits. No longer would I be able to fell as if I was part of the collective omnipitent being which acted as a passive narrator. This left me with the feeling I wanted to write something with powerful characters, that focused on characterisation rather than having a point storywise.
Afterdark made me want to write my own novel, I’ve been progressing on writing the novel at a slow pace but I have completed the most important phase to me, the creation of characters. The novel itself may not be connected to my project, but it did teach me how to carefully carve personalities into my characters.
The idea for my novel is both a simple and complex one, its set in whats known as a manga cafe in Tokyo at 3 in the morning. A manga cafe is pretty much an internet cafe, with seperate booths, free refils and a tonne of comic books. Its not uncommon for people who don’t want to go home or travelers to take refuge in these places for an entire night, due to cheap hourly rates. Now the story actually involves two stories taking place at the exact same time, each chapter alternates which story is being told, so you get both sides of each story. Both stories involve a member of staff who works at the counter of the cafe, she is a depressed young woman, unhappy with how her life is unfolding. As a way of excluding herself from society she chooses to work nights where the only customers are usually recluses. In each different dimension this character, named Shizuka goes through the same evening, however she meets a very different person each time. The different characters who enter at the same time, the same place but in different dimensions, influence the Shizuka of that dimension in very different ways and end up changing her life for the better in their own little ways. One character is an eccentric extrovert, the other an introvert with deep insight, both with completly different ways of living.
The writing process for this was an organic one, and I had a great time writing the two characters seperated by dimensions, polar opposites of each other. Both where born as the same person, but they made very different choices and grew up in different ways. When I write a character I like to think of a brief outline and then list everything I can that makes the character.
I split these lists into several catagories and rack my brain until I can fill them. These usually include:
● Hobby
● Looks
● Personality
● Quirks
●Goals/ambitions
Hobbies are very important ways of distinguishing idenitity and personality when it comes to building characters, different hobbies can invoke different personality traits. Looks are important for helping me visualise a character, in the process I can think of new things to add what these idenitity traits could signify – if someone has messy hair, we can tell they are an unorganized person, or looks do not concern them. Personalty I don’t need to explain, but its a section that I leave for towards the end, as I already have a rough idea how the character acts, and the hobbies and looks help me build on the already existing personality outlines. Quirks are important as your characters have to be beliveable, they have to be human. As a freak who added my friend on myspace a year ago’s introduction so eliquently states “NO 1 R PERFECT”, in this instance truer words have never been spoken, or written. Ambitons/Goals are important because a character needs a resendetre, it helps flesh them out and make them seem more interesting, more realistic.
Now for the 2 dimensionally seperated characters I cheated slightly and based them on extreme versions of myself in different moods. I can be both very talkitive and very shy depending on my mood, and I stretched these moods to extremes and made them into characters. These characters are both my best and my worst sides, as well as a few added extra quirks so they aren’t accurate portrails of myself, they are more hyper-real polarities of the same magnet. I’m going to start with the extrovert, and transcribe the character creation sheet which can be found in the ideas book of my novel in the making.
Name: Yamazaki Chikara ヤマザキ・力
Personality:
-Confident
-eccentric, tells strange anecdotes
-tends to say what he thinks, when he thinks it
-playful, likes to joke around
-respects everyone he meets equally
-has a very loud voice, excites easily
-positive, doesn’t overthink anything
-doesn’t get out much so he seems uninformed about some aspects of society, but he can say wise things from time to time
Hobbies:
-exploring places open 24 hours at late night for the atmosphere
*Manga cafes
*Convienience Stores
*Family resturants
-reading vintage manga (from 70s-90s)
-reading books without blurbs
-talking to women he doesn’t know
-making people feel happy
-searching the internet for strange facts
-arcade games
Quirks:
-Speaks informal Japanese
-Wears sunglasses at night
-gets into conversations with strangers
-drinks green tea obsessively
-stays up late at night, sleeps during the day, prefers night to day
-very hyperactive
-hates mobile phones and doesn’t have one
Looks:
-Long Straight black hair
-White jacket, Jeans, brown trainers
-Sunglasses
-Light stubble
-is always smiling
-wears a huge green backpack
-blue wristband with a pacman symbol on it
Ambitions:
-Works as a writer, but wants to write something that changes at least one persons life for the better
-to make as many people as possible happy, wether he knows them or not
-is content and happy with what he has, even if he cannot fufil his ambitions
Yamazaki is a generic Japanese name, Chikara is Japanese for power. How this name came to be is a pretty interesting anecdote in itself. A few years ago I spent 6 months on an exchange trip to Japan, during the first week and the last week of this trip I was in Tokyo along with many other European students, and in particular I made good friends with two bizarre gentlemen, one from Luxemburg and another from Germany, similarily happy to befriend, myself a bizarre british gentleman. We had a very strict curfew enforced on us by the people in charge of the programme and one day Anthony (from Luxumburg) and I had had enough of this (the rule abiding Lucas decided he didn’t really want to get into much trouble) and we had decided we wanted to go outside at night, and see a different side of Tokyo. Before breaking out we decided to dress ridiculously and employ psuedenyms. I was Yamazaki Chikara, and he was Sumiya Supreme (named after Sumiya-san, one of the curfew enforcers), we stocked up on redbull and while wearing sunglasses at night we broke out of the hotel at 3am. During this time, partially because I was in character I was struck by a wave of confidence. As we explored the 24/7 family resturants (ordering nothing but water, which was free) and the convienience stores which where flooded with an almost devine light I had no qualms with entering via action roll (as if I where Jack Bauer of 24 fame) and talking to the staff that worked there at random, without fear, telling them the ridiculous made up stories of Yamazaki Chikara. At about 5am we stopped into a 24/7 gyudon resturant and proceeded to consume bowls of beef and discuss how that was the greatest evening ever. Yamazaki Chikara’s character is too good to be true, despite the fact it was indeed true. His looks section even match how I looked at the time. Just a note, the Yamazaki Chikara in the novel is indeed British, its just hes grown attached to his pen-name.
I like to believe theirs a little Yamazaki Chikara in all of us.
On the opposite side of the coin I decided to create a version of me so introverted that he may possibly be affraid of his own shadow. I’ll explain why a bit later.
Name: Boku 僕
Personality:
-Shy but cheerful
-withdrawn yet energetic
-tends to avoid confrontation unless it presents itself
-can be courageous, but it requires a build up
-waits for moments to present themselves
-is cautious but likes people
-has trouble talking to strangers
-puts others ahead of himself
-positive at times, negative at times, sometimes overthinks things.
Hobbies:
-reading manga and novels
-model kits
-studying Japanese
-Writing
-Psp games (one player ones, obviously)
Quirks:
-despite his introverted nature he laughs loudly
-cries at sad books
-tends to look serious even when hes in a good mood
-speaks polite Japanese
-drinks green tea obssesively, but only gets it from the drinks counter of the manga cafe if no one else is there
-likes eating cup noodles
-is actually very energetic, but lacks confidence
-is affraid of mobile phone ringtones
-when hes at a manga cafe he reads entire series’ of manga quickly and places them back on the shelf
-always lets people pass him and waits
Looks:
-long straight hair that covers his eyes
-thin rimmed rectangular glasses
-rollerneck jumper
-black trousers
Ambitions:
-To become a writer
-To perfect his Japanese so that he can communicate better with people
I’m not this bad, but when I first got to Japan I was pretty timmid, that was until I decided to ask the girl I had a crush on in class out (and get rejected) that I decided, hey, you don’t live life being timmid! And manned up a bit, but this is a hyper representation of me at my most introverted. And depending on my mood I can be suprisingly quiet at times despite my loud voice. In terms of looks, these characters look exactly the same as I did a few years ago in my head. The point is, both of these guys have very diffent personalities, meaning they have different impacts on different characters in the story. The extrovert frequently wanders around and talks to people in the story and the introvert stays in his booth at the manga cafe typing away.
He is boku, which is Japanese for “Myself”, its the modest way of saying I. He has a few pages of narration during the introduction for his dimension where he reveals he doesn’t want the reader to know his name otherwise they would eventually meet him and hes pretty paranoid about this. He uses boku when he speaks. Where as Yamazaki uses the pronoun “ore” the more masculine, informal way to refer to oneself.
This leads us to the most important character, one I created completly independently from an idea. I wanted to portray a lonley person who is strong enough to know she doesn’t need help, but secretly wishes someone will help her.
Name: Shizuka 静香
Hobby:
-Listening to classical music, though she does not play any instraments. Her favourite composer is Gustav Mahler
-enjoys reading books and girls manga, hates male orientated manga because of its simplicity.
Looks:
-Thick framed glasses
-short bob cut (I originally wanted to give her unkempt long hair, but I felt a short bob cut would make more of an impression. And it was the kind of image I saw in my head when I thought of her character.)
-wears a hooded top that is too big for her
-jeans
-a white apron (its the uniform for manga cafe counter staff) + badge with her name written on it
-doesn’t smile much
Personality:
-Gloomy
-Not much of a talker
-Intelligent, but tends to make assumptions of people
-Gets nervous at times, socialising makes her uneasy unless she has gotten to know someone
-Negative, tends to overthink things
-always looking for the safest easiest route, doesn’t take risks
-observant, studies everything.
Quirks:
-Always leaves her tea for too long until it gets cold, but she doesn’t like cold tea.
-leaves store wrapping on books so no one can see the cover of what she is reading (Japanese bookstores do this for some reason)
-has a habit of checking customers computers after they leave the cafe
- can fall asleep at the counter from time to time
-hates riding the train/tram, walks everywhere she can.
Ambition:
-To get into a good university, and become an acomplished writer
-She failed her university entrance tests and gave up on her dreams temporarily.
During the writing process she seemed a bit of a depressing character, and I wanted to liven things up a bit. So I gave her some strange quirks to make her seem more alive. Yamazaki Chikara would be the kind of person to notice these quirks and point them out during coversation, and boku would try his best to not draw attention to them, but end up doing so. The quirks are benificial in terms of character interaction. Also, note Shizuka uses the Japanese kanji for Silent, yet it also uses the kanji for spring, suggesting that a change is imminent. I don’t list her family name becuase it is never revealed, her name is only discovered by the characters since it is inscribed on her staff badge.

Heres a quick sketch of the characters in anime style, since the novel will be devoid of illustration, these images are just for the sake of decorating this blog post a bit. The sketches for the characters based off of me are based on how I actually looked at the time and the sketch for Shizuka it seems was partially inspired by a character from an anime called Neon Genesis Evangelion, named Rei Ayanami. The character always looks sad and is a misfit to society, she has a similar haircut and expression to Shizuka but their personalities are definatly very different. Everyone in Evangelion suffers some kind of mental trauma, so its kind of fitting.
I’ve kind of cheated an already written my game characters, to expect to see posts on them over the next few days. You’re in for a treat!